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Great song

Hey.

Very nice composition here.

I like use of the reverse cymbals.
The two low notes on the strings riff that starts at 1:29 are a little strange. I would consider using different notes, preferably higher notes.

It sounds like you are experimenting with the harp a bit towards the end there. there are a few notes that seem misplaced, but it otherwise sounds fine.

There should be a bigger buildup and finish to 1:53.

Otherwise excellent song.

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- Ziro out.

Bosa responds:

Thanks for the advice. I may edit this song (as it is being used in a PC Roleplaying adventure game). There are a few things I wish to add and take out.

But once again, thank you. I appreciate you reviewing my music, and I appreciate your willingness to contribute to this site.

Smooth

Hey.

Nice Jazz tune.

The overall composition, and improvising solo part with the Jazz guitar was great.

Only thing is, the background piano was a bit muffled, and it sounded like all the notes in the chord were being hit at the same time. Also, would have liked to hear a different ride cymbal on the finishing beat.

Nevertheless, a very good composition, soldier. :-|
* salutes *

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-Ziro out.

BloodFest responds:

Thanks alot for your review dude. It ruled haha!

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