Zir0's audio Reviews on Newgrounds

[Winter at the Castle]

Great song

Hey.

Very nice composition here.

I like use of the reverse cymbals.
The two low notes on the strings riff that starts at 1:29 are a little strange. I would consider using different notes, preferably higher notes.

It sounds like you are experimenting with the harp a bit towards the end there. there are a few notes that seem misplaced, but it otherwise sounds fine.

There should be a bigger buildup and finish to 1:53.

Otherwise excellent song.

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- Ziro out.

Bosa responds:

Thanks for the advice. I may edit this song (as it is being used in a PC Roleplaying adventure game). There are a few things I wish to add and take out.

But once again, thank you. I appreciate you reviewing my music, and I appreciate your willingness to contribute to this site.

[Equinox (John Coltrane Cover)]

Smooth

Hey.

Nice Jazz tune.

The overall composition, and improvising solo part with the Jazz guitar was great.

Only thing is, the background piano was a bit muffled, and it sounded like all the notes in the chord were being hit at the same time. Also, would have liked to hear a different ride cymbal on the finishing beat.

Nevertheless, a very good composition, soldier. :-|
* salutes *

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-Ziro out.

BloodFest responds:

Thanks alot for your review dude. It ruled haha!